Review: First Position by Prescott Lane

Posted September 12, 2013 by Jonetta in Book Review, Misc | | 4 Comments

I received this book for free from Author in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

Review: First Position by Prescott LaneFirst Position by Prescott Lane
Published by Prescott Lane on April 15, 2013
Genres: Contemporary Romance
Format: eARC
Source: Author

Rated: B

Emory faces life’s challenges at the one place that’s never failed her, the ballet barre. But even the barre can’t steady her when fate brings her face-to-face with her old college flame, Mason, who’s hoping to return to the NFL after a career-threatening injury. Before they can surrender to their sexual desires and find salvation in each other’s arms, they need to come to terms with their past. Mason must confront the demons that have set him on a path of self-destruction, while Emory must decide whether to keep her painful secrets locked away, or expose them and risk losing the love of her life. But nothing can prepare Mason for what Emory has kept hidden, or the possibility that he himself may be to blame for the very secrets she keeps – and why they continue to haunt her.


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The set up
Emory Claire was abandoned by Daniel (Mason) Mason six years ago, right before college graduation. She’s tried to move on with her life but hasn’t ever really gotten over Mason. She’d planned to be a prima ballerina and he moved on to a successful NFL career. That is until a recent accidental encounter where both had a flood of old feelings overwhelm them.


The issues
Mason is an NFL quarterback recovering from a potential career-ending injury and is being considered by teams in Charlotte, NC (where Emory now lives) and Seattle. He’s also in the middle of a divorce from his pretentious wife and Emory is engaged, for the moment, to someone else. She’s not forgotten how much he hurt her and Mason will do just about anything to get her back.


What worked
I really liked Emory, a young woman that took some really serious blows and survived. She’s recreated herself and is pretty successful in her new career and isn’t willing to let Mason just waltz back into her life. She’s very clear about her needs and isn’t afraid to be straight with him about them. We get alternating perspectives from both of them and the author uses some unique devices to manage the conversations skillfully. It helped keep the story moving at a good pace. I also liked the integration of Mason’s family into the plot as they were really entertaining.


What didn’t work so well
Mason’s behavior was really immature and he needed to grow up fast (he’s 28!). His temper tantrums were over the top and his relationship with his mother was telling (overbearing doesn’t even BEGIN to describe her). Emory was keeping a HUGE secret but was berating Mason and being highly judgmental for withholding important decisions and information from her. It didn’t make sense. I also didn’t like how her gay roommate was portrayed as it was too stereotypical. He deserved better.


The bottom line
This was a sweet romance between two really nice people (though Mason needs to put on some big boy pants) who made some serious errors in judgment that ended up keeping them apart. It’s a feel good story with highly emotional intersections that gave these characters depth. I loved Emory even when she was being unreasonable in her thinking and liked Mason, too, though it may sound like I didn’t…his devotion to Emory was never a question and kept me connected. I liked the story and it was nice to read a standalone book for a change, especially one with a heartwarming epilogue.


About Prescott Lane

Prescott Lane is the author of First Position, Perfectly Broken, and her new release, Quiet Angel. She is originally from Little Rock, Arkansas, and graduated from Centenary College with a degree in sociology. She went on to receive her MSW from Tulane University, after which she worked with developmentally delayed and disabled children. She married her college sweetheart, and they currently live in New Orleans with their two children and two crazy dogs. Prescott started writing at the age of five, and sold her first story about a talking turtle to her father for a quarter. She later turned to writing romance novels because there aren’t enough happily ever afters in real life.

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4 responses to “Review: First Position by Prescott Lane

  1. I absolutely love that cover! But I’m not sure this one’s for me; I have a feeling I’d get too frustrated by Mason to enjoy it. Great review.

    • When he was good, he was great. When he was bad, he was very immature. Aside from the beginning, he never waivered in his pursuit of Emory, though. That wasn’t my issue. His tantrums centered around jealousy of Emory’s ex.

  2. I have to say, that tittle had me intrigued since I first saw it, now a B rating will always put it one my radar for an audiobook release.
    Thanks Jonetta 🙂